Story fork for test:

1. Story version with 1950's style writing and plot limits:

2. Story version with 2000's language and more adult plot themes:

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Jump to end of fork

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Rejoin after fork

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Outline for remainder of our story

• Walks and Talks

• Each person in the crew spends a shift with Cephei walking and talking
• Talks are about technical issues
• Talks are about inter-people concepts
• These build to talks of the symbiotic relationship between humans and machines

• They reach their destination and can now safely continue their mission.

• Final Scene with real heads in central shaft

• Everyone sticks their head into the central shaft
• They can see each other's real persons.
• It is weird that Cephei is not there.

End Story

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